"This is the story of how I met and fell in love with the most stunning filly in the world" -Anon
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"WHERE IS SHE?!?!?!?"
Batman~
This is now my fave chpt so far...
Simpley because of THIS PART
I really almost fell of my chair
(P.s. think of my laugh as the jokers, the batman jokes begin)
Eh, I think I'll leave this here for now. You write pretty well, and I do love the premise, but sometimes the storytelling and characterization is very.. juvenile i suppose is the right word. So much so that it breaks the immersion.
For example when Silver explains why they act the way they do, or how minor conflicts are resolved on a dime, or how the protagonist seems to be a bit if a Gary stu.
Not giving it a dislike, mind. And I hope you continue writing and continue to improve.
Well...
That's the largest font size I've seen in a fic so far.
6696117
Dear god I'm reading on my phone it took up the whole screen (widthwise)