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Why are you writing such a sterotypical, meaningless ine or mindless nonsense and writing?
seriously dude, it was old within the first few sentences. Its just.... Dumb. not even shocking, just dumb.
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Why are you writing such a
sterotypicalstereotypical, meaninglessine or, mindlessnonsense, and nonsensicaland writingstory?sSeriously, dude, it was old within the first few sentences.ItsIt's just....Ddumb. It's not even shocking,; it's just dumb.Thank you for your well thought and intelligent response. I will take your advice to heart and consider it in my future writing.
Pinkie kinda made sense as another bloodthirsty killer, but Lotus seems a bit out of left field; she's got all the sex she wants and apparently loves incest quite a lot. You'd think she wouldn't think of snuff as being something so much better than that that she'd want to become a full-time murderer.
Hmm.. Good Story. Cannot wait to see what happens next!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
6907938 ... Grammar much?![:trixieshiftright:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trixieshiftright.png)
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6908281 You really think i am going to bother spellchecking for a story of this low bar?
6909560 Great work! I see that you were very careful to avoid errors in your new comment.
6908545 That's a good point. I could have had her overdose on something else beforehoof, like maybe something she'd never tried before, and used that to explain her suddenly brutal actions.
Wise words from Applejack.
A paper cut is torment anyway, I don’t see what difference it would make.
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I don't want to sound rude, but it's kinda ironic that you correct someone else's comment, when your story has a lot of grammatical errors.Just as an example:the"eye puss"thing.First of all, it's"pus", and second, eyes only have pus if there's an infection, otherwise it's vitreous humour