Denied by her love, Twilight seeks a way back to Rarity, or at least some form of peace. In one of Nightmare Moon's old books she finds a spell that could give her both. Question is, does she want to pay the price?
I'll never understand latex as a fetish, but this looks quite interesting (and corruption certainly is my thing) so I'll definitely be tracking.
If I had one bit of constructive criticism, I feel like you need to make more use of contractions (I'm, you're, etc.) at last with characters like Applejack. The dialogue feels a little wooden when there's lots of "I am". It's a minor thing though.
Great to see you writing again, Bass Cannon. Feels like it's been awhile.
6436803 Well I hope to finish this one over the weekend. The other one is a bit more complicated since it is a collaborative effort, but my writing partner is knee deep in school obligations.
6436917 Wonderful, another joins the cause... Don't worry, latex stories are my forte. If you desire more, PM so I can provide you with links that are worth your time.
Where did you get the cover art?
6435264 My apologies. I have added the link in the source.
Interesting. Keeping an eye out for part two.
NICE. I think I saw one like this once. Rainbow was rejected so she became the Shadowbolt to get her love to like her back.
6435470 *Coughs loudly*
6435493 Yeah I realized it after I put my comment up.
I'll never understand latex as a fetish, but this looks quite interesting (and corruption certainly is my thing) so I'll definitely be tracking.
If I had one bit of constructive criticism, I feel like you need to make more use of contractions (I'm, you're, etc.) at last with characters like Applejack. The dialogue feels a little wooden when there's lots of "I am". It's a minor thing though.
Great to see you writing again, Bass Cannon. Feels like it's been awhile.
Only two? You teased us with all of them, good to see you writing again though. You make interesting, if unfinished stories.
not bad, so when are you going to make a new chapters with other of your story?
so what this story about?
Nice. This'll be going into my faves.
6435470 Hehe, rejection is a powerful tool...
Sweet luna o.o
I might have a latex fetish surfacing.
Please. Do continue.
6436559 I will, don't worry. Meanwhile, my other stories might help you find out if you have it or not.
6436569 o.o im reading one right now, thx though, i'll report back with my progress of latexfying my mind when im done.
6436577 I am sure it will be a lovely ride!
6436410 Will you do the other one as well?
6436787 In what context?
6436802 ..... clever girl. No seriously will you be continuing both stories and do they both exist in the same universe?
6436803 Well I hope to finish this one over the weekend. The other one is a bit more complicated since it is a collaborative effort, but my writing partner is knee deep in school obligations.
6436811 AH.
6436653 what a lovely ride indeed!
I can say that im posetively into latex, I hope to delve into more latex stories from you o3o
6436917 Wonderful, another joins the cause... Don't worry, latex stories are my forte. If you desire more, PM so I can provide you with links that are worth your time.
6436949 I may just have to PM for the same. Latex is <3
6440470 If you so wish, of course. Careful though, it has a tendency to stick in your mind...
6440867 I might be able to get those links as well?
6442561 My my, getting quite the response. Why not make a thread in the Latex Ponies group, and I will add them there for all you lovely shiny ponies?
6442584 Okay
That was odd, as always. And, like usual, I really enjoyed it
6443200 Shiny and wierd is my forte, what can I say.
Interesting, it be interesting if Specter wanted both (Against twilightr decision.)