• Published 30th Sep 2015
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The Lost Fog - Brony_cruiser



Namasaki is a super Yamato, a part of the fog thats on a mission. during the mission he was suddenly sucked through a portal. only a starting story, dont expect the best. Celestia/luna X OC. only constructive critisism please. this is my first story

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Ch-3 Creating peaceful relations

Author's Note:

Ok fist off, I AM SO SORRY for not getting this chapter done sooner. I recently had my ACT tests and they were annoying to go through. Otherwise school and family were making it impossible to work on this story for very long. at the end of this message there is a video on YouTube about an American BB firing it's guns. Obviously they are not the same caliber as the A-150's they are the closest representation I can find of something of that caliber being fired. . Also, for the sake of it not being confusing, I am going to try my best to make it like a FPPOV, there will be moments that are 3rd ppov but that's only when it's needed. I am still looking for an editor. Otherwise, enjoy the chapter and give feedback. No flame please but I need to know what you guys think on the story so I know if I need to fix any mistakes or not. Also, I am going to try my hardest to set up a time for writing this story as I don't have one yet. That all being said, Have a good day and watch out for flying animals! I was hit by one a couple of days ago and scared the shit out of me. :pinkiehappy: The video, the sound of the guns being fired isn't very loud and I don't know why. Even so, these are the guns of the Wisconsin being fired and loaded. video

Time: 13:45 Hours

Location: 2 Miles From Canterlot

A-150 Super Yamato Class Battleship

Callsign: Namasaki

I was currently still running towards Canterlot, as the princess told me the name of the city on the mountain. What I had originally thought to be a half hour trip to the castle had actually taken longer than I thought. I was still running along my path that I created out of my klein hexagons. To my right, the princess' carriage had some how caught up to me, probably when I had to increase the angle of my path which slowed me down a bit. Looking back ahead, I was still counting the amount of time it took me to get up to the castle. So far, I had counted around 45 minute's. Apparently the distance from Ponyville to the castle was far longer than I guessed. Either way, I was still nearing my destination and was about to jump down to the courtyard when I was suddenly tackled from behind. This happening, I was thrown from my path, which disintegrated when I was no longer on it, and down to the courtyard 20 or so feet below me.

As soon as I had landed, I immediately spun around on my hands, throwing the one who tackled me off, jumped and landed on my feet, materializing my weapon as I did so. You see, all Fog get to choose a weapon of their choice when they are awoken. While we had the option to choose any weapon, ranging from fire arms to swords and spears, we always stuck to the basic weapons. When I chose my weapon, I was actually stuck on what to choose so I combined both of my top choices. This resulted in me, currently, spinning around my double bladed staff. I then pointed the weapon at my attacker who was actually one of the guards who wore the golden armor. When I realized who it was, I went into a slightly more calm stance before the princess of the day would get here. It seems everything here is trying to kill me in one way or another. I shall tell the princess of her mistakes when we get thi- However, before I could even finish my thoughts, I detected Celestia walking up from behind me. Turning to her, while keeping my staff trained at the guard who tackled me, I gave her a small smile before putting my weapon away. When she asked as to why I had a weapon trained on her guard, I gave her my simple answer:

"Oh, that. Your guard decided it was a good idea to tackle me from my path to meet you at the castle, as I know you were watching. Of course I materialized my weapon because I felt threatened. And if I feel threatened, I will retaliate."

"But did you have to scare my guard? You could've just came to me and I would have settled the matter."

"Yes but where's the fun in that?" Wiping the smirk of my face I sighed, deciding to move on, I said. "Anyway, I will forgive your guard for now but if it happens again, I will not hesitate to attack." As this was being said, I gave the princess and the guard who attacked me a look of annoyance before quickly hiding my emotions behind my natural blank look. Turning fully to the princess I decided to address her again.

"Anyway, with that out of the way, I want to get this meeting over with. I don't feel like being away from my body for too long as it might be slightly more vulnerable to attack." When she heard this, Celestia turned to me and gave a slight nod while flashing a smile and we continued on our way. Of course with me walking slightly behind her through the castle, it was inevitable for some of the sentries to suddenly surround me before Celestia would intervene. Once we got to the throne room however, I was meet with no resistance. The only person in the throne room itself was another alicorn like Celestia but smaller and blue. When said sun princess walked over and sat on her throne, I merely walked halfway through the room to stand in the center of it. Looking up at both of the princesses, I waited before Celestia began with the pleasantries.

"Well, time to get this started. Namasaki, this is my sister Princess Luna. Luna, this Namasaki, a "warship" from a different world." When she said the warship part, she brought up her hooves and did the quoting motion. While I was slightly glaring at Celestia, my golden eyes making her very uneasy, Luna decided to ease the tension.

"It is nice to meet you Namasaki." Looking at her while wiping the glare off my face, I simply gave her a blank stare and responded likewise. Looking back at Celestia I asked her if we could speed things up so I could hurry and get back to my ship.

"Of course Namasaki, I want to know why you want to stay here instead of going back to your world."

"Ah, that. Well, where I came from, I was at war with a race known as humans. To which my body is modeled after, with my own input of course. As to what I am, though I told you I need to tell princess Luna as well, I am part of a race known as the Fog. We are an old race of technical computer programs that have the ability to have feelings. We were created as weapons for the admiralty code to fight." Finishing up my little speech, I looked at both of the princesses, who had a look of shock mixed with disbelief. When Celestia asked for me to prove it, I simply gave her a dead panned look before deciding to speak once more.

"Really? I already showed you my powers over the ship earlier in the little town and now you want me to show you again? Fine, I can show you how my basic weapons work. However you will need a way to get there as I can just phase to my ship."

"Me and Luna can teleport all of us there, it will be faster than going by normal means." As she said this, they both got up and stood to either side of me. Horns glowing, we were all enveloped in a golden and blue hue as we teleported. It was a strange experience to say at the least. It felt like I was flying and falling at the same time. When we reappeared, I nearly fell to the deck of my body. Throwing my hands out to stop my fall, I stopped myself from hitting the familiar wooden deck of my ship body. When I regained enough control of my mental model, I began to stand up. When I did, I looked at the princesses who gave me a concerned look before I waved it off. Walking towards the conning tower, I jumped and flipped through the air, softly landing on the heavily armored turret that housed some of my main guns. Turning around, I decided to get the whole situation over with so I could monitor the systems of my current state.

"Alright, so you want me to show you that I am of the Fog and can control this ship." when the princess nodded, I gave Celestia a smirk before activating my first stage combat levels. This brought a ring of patterns around my mental model while I looked out over the ocean.

"Alright, I'm going to fire one of my main guns housed in the turrets that I'm standing on." Before Celestia could ask what a gun was, I cut her off.

"While I could explain what a gun is in detail, I don't have the time. In short words a gun, or main battery in my case, a gun is a weapon that houses a projectile in the chamber. When the gun is fired the hammer is launched forward striking the back of the shell and igniting the explosive powder within. When that happens, the pressure is too much for the bullet or shell to stay within the casing and is shot out of the barrel towards the intended target. That is how my guns work except instead of a tiny two to three inch long bullet, I am firing 510mm armor piercing or high explosive shells." During my little explanation, I commanded my turrets to turn to the side and face the open ocean, away from any and all land masses. When I asked if the princesses were ready, and they said they were, I gave them an early warning lest they go deaf from the guns firing.

"Okay, before I fire the main batteries, I need you to cover your ears because these things are pretty damn loud." That being said, I waited for about half a minute before they both conjured up earmuffs. Once they did that, I began the process of loading my guns. The sounds of clicks and metal sliding on metal filled the air with a constant whirring sound. When they gave me the ok, I connected myself to their minds and spoke to them from there.

"Ok, I know this is a little intrusive but you won't be able to hear me when these things go off, even with the earmuffs. I need to know if you are ready for this. Are you still ready?" When they both gave me confirmation, I gave them a simple "Ok". When I heard the familiar click of the guns being ready to fire, I fired the guns. When the smoke had suddenly blasted out of the barrels, we all felt the loud retort of the massive guns I was blessed with for battle.

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM.

Firing my guns in intervals of turrets, I had to pass on turret number 3 because it was still in somewhat critical condition, I noticed that the ship itself had moved back a couple of feet in the water, throwing the two princesses off balance. Looking proud of my ship I began to think about myself and my weapons. I always loved hearing the sound of my 510mm boom when they fired. To me, it represented my will to fight and need to help other of my kind or those who needed it. When the guns stopped spewing smoke and the noise had died down, I turned to Celestia and Luna, both of which had taken their earmuffs off already. While we waited for their hearing to return, I deactivated my stage one combat mode and activated my passive mode while bringing up my ships current state so I could look them over. While I was checking to see if everything was optimal, which it was, Both Celestia and l=Luna looked at me with a face of wonder and slight fear. When I finished my check up, I turned to my left and sat there waiting for the princesses reply:

"Well... that was not what we were expecting. And you said that these were weapons?" When I nodded my head, she continued: "Hmm, well then I'm going to have to ask you to not use your ship in any way regarding these weapons when in my country.'

"very well." When I said this, she looked at me with a bewildered expression.

"Wait, you're not going to object? At all?"

"If it's what must be done then so be it. I am here for peace not war."

After saying this, we sat there for a few hours talking about what the terms for me living in Equestria were. Turns out, I had a pretty clean slate. I was allowed to live in the castle as long as I wouldn't use my weapons on her subjects. I agreed since if I was ever attacked I could use my staff. We talked well into the night, I got to see Luna raise the moon which confused the hell out of me so they had to explain it to me. Huh, they control the sun and the moon. What an interesting prospect..... Afterwards we all teleported back to the castle in Canterlot for some well deserved rest. We talked for a while again, some jokes were thrown in, until it was too late to stay up as my energy reserves for my mental model were getting low. Voicing it out to the princesses, they led me to my room, which was just across from Celestia's for some reason, and opened the door. As I walked into the room, Celestia spoke up from behind me.

"Namasaki?"

"Yes?"

"Although you were brought here under some harsh conditions, I hope our differing species can become friends." When she said this she had a sincere smile on her face before I gave her one as well.

"I hope so too. Since I was awoken, this is the first chance I can finally live in peace. I believe this will finally be what I've been looking for. Thank you." Bidding the princesses good night, I walked over to my bed, spinning around while materializing some sleepwear on, I climbed into bed and settled down for some sleep. looking out the window to my left, I sat there studying the stars before closing my eyes for some peaceful sleep.