General Raam was the military leader of the Locust Horde and had almost succeeded in wiping out humanity until he was killed by Delta squad. The General however, finds himself in a new world while also feeling drawn to a new queen.
It turns out raam knew it was going to be a trap but he also heard there may be cookies. So they went. Got cookies, got drunk with a small price of being trapped and sent for exacusion, but hay! It was worth it.
6523494 I have a writers block on Twilight guardian so that's on hold. Good ideas for The queens general. Right now I'm working on a new story. Creating my own character. I have the first chapter done just need a description for the story. I also making really sure to not turn him into a Mary sue. I really want this character I'm creating to be.....my own child to mold
6523720 I see and I am glad that you are not making a Mary sue because this some times put me and I am sure many other people off reading, but I am really looking forward to this story and good luck.
I love this story
Raam likes cookies... I can see a running gag forming from that.
A peace treaty, I can see that will be an ambush to end the war. I sense a plot to destroy the
jediI mean changelings.They might be able to persuade Raam into a peace treaty if they have wine and cookies at the meeting. Lol
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I call bull on this so called peace treaty. Raam, your orders are to slaughter them all.
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It turns out raam knew it was going to be a trap but he also heard there may be cookies. So they went. Got cookies, got drunk with a small price of being trapped and sent for exacusion, but hay! It was worth it.
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6516339 when will there be a new chapter for this or your other story because I really like both of them and can't what for the next one
6523494 I have a writers block on Twilight guardian so that's on hold. Good ideas for The queens general. Right now I'm working on a new story. Creating my own character. I have the first chapter done just need a description for the story. I also making really sure to not turn him into a Mary sue. I really want this character I'm creating to be.....my own child to mold
6523720 I see and I am glad that you are not making a Mary sue because this some times put me and I am sure many other people off reading, but I am really looking forward to this story and good luck.
6523742 Ay and thank you I can say my OC is.....unique compared to other OC ponies
I smell a trap, well not literally but you get it.
The story was down for me, so I was scared shirtless if you deleted it or not. Thank god.
One thing that'd make it better would be him drinking milk instead of wine.