Fluttershy the felt Mac’s cock disappear, her cunt left gaping. In the next instance, a loud, blaring noise shattered the world around her. Fluttershy’s eyes flew open and saw she was in her bed; leaning to the side, she saw her alarm clock ringing her five am alarm.
That threw me for a curve. Funny, I thought it was odd to start off a story with instant clop, but I like what you've done.
After finishing just this chapter, I can't wait to see what the second is like, and I hope you do publish a third.
Awesome job, my friend!
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Thank you, I'm feeling pretty good about it
6672301 And Happy Thanksgiving!
please write more
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Oh I plan to
damn... just d-damn
That was just plan awesome read Ihope he makes a herd .
Anyone wanna help me with editing some chapters? I'm sorta doing the next 4 simultaenously, working on one when I get an idea.
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A little late for it, certainly, but I could help with editing, I think. That is, if you're still interested.
i love the fics that have big mac doing it with several mares
That threw me for a curve. Funny, I thought it was odd to start off a story with instant clop, but I like what you've done.
After finishing just this chapter, I can't wait to see what the second is like, and I hope you do publish a third.
Pretty good. Really hot yet also with a sense of conflict.