Scootaloo's Special Friend

by goldentig3r

Chapter 10: The Kiss

It was Saturday, one day before Sugar Cane was planned to be killed. Scootaloo and Sugar Cane were playing in the backyard of Scootaloo's mother's house.

They were bouncing the ball back and forth. Scootaloo suddenly stopped and sat on the bench.

Sugar Cane followed.

She saw that there was a tear in Scootaloo's eye.

"Hey what's wrong Scootaloo." Sugar Cane asked.

"*Sniff* *Sniff* I'm still sad over the divorce." Scootaloo said trying not to burst into tears.

"It's okay Scootaloo i feel the same way besides the fact that i don't even have parents." Sugar Cane replied.

Scootaloo was about to start crying, but before she could Sugar Cane pressed her lips against Scootaloo's lips.

Scootaloo suddenly felt better and when Sugar Cane was about to let go Scootaloo pressed against her lips even tighter.

It was about five minutes before they both let go. When they stopped they knew that there love was meant to be.

Comments

[goldentig3r]

Just a little note that Sugar Cane is just a character that i made up and the divorce chapter i've expearianced in my life

[Boop-Happy Lass]

is Sugar Cane a stallion or a mare? if mare then the kiss wouldn't even happen cause Scootaloo's a mare

[TheFanficFanPony]

6342711

In MLP, most ships are girl x girl.

But even so, Scootaloo isn't an idiot. She wouldn't kiss somepony she only knew for 2 days.

[TheFanficFanPony]

Scootaloo suddenly felt better and when Sugar Cane was about to let go Scootaloo pressed against her lips even tighter.
It was about five minutes before they both let go. When they stopped they knew that there love was meant to be.

Ignoring all of the grammatical errors, there is still so much wrong with this paragraph. They only knew each other for a week! Didn't you watch Frozen?

Also,
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Scootaloo likes Tiara (or AB, SB, or any other pony really).

[Dustchu]

Good lord this is escalating at lightening speed. Theyve only know each other for two days, already kissing and she's about to be killed.
wow. hehe eue

6343474 I ship this so hard 8D That pic is adorable.

[Samey90]

It was Saturday, one day before Sugar Cane was planned to be killed.

And the award for the most awkward use of passive voice goes to...