Scootaloo's Special Friend

by goldentig3r

Chapter 2: Ground One, Sky Zero

The CMC argued about who'd go first. Finally they all chose Sweetie belle. Sweetie belle took one huge leap and the wind picked up her paraglider and took her soaring 5 feet above the ground and suddenly face planted onto the ground.

She stood up moaning in pain.

"Are you okay Sweetie belle?" Scootaloo asked.

Sweetie belle replied with a stuttering voice.

"I...I'm o...okay"

Next it was Apple Bloom's turn. She took a big leap into the air and flew just about 7 feet into the air.

She tried to control the paraglider, but the wind was just too powerful.

She Fell onto a ground, when they heard a giant snap come from Apple Bloom. She had broken her hoof.

Sweetie belle came and helped her injured friend.

Sweetie belle set Apple Bloom beside the gear they had brought. Sweetie belle found the First Aid kit and wrapped Apple Bloom's broken hoof with a bandage.

Comments

[luftschl0ss]

So, um... this story is... a thing. Yes! THAT'S IT! A THING!
Um, um... thing is a word people use to describe something. Hah hah...
I'm sorry, but you may need an editor. Or several. Also, maybe work with a few authours. A few hundred, that is.

[The oracle]

I have only read the first two chapters, but I can already tell that I dint like this. Combine these chapters to make them longer.