KO hope to see this story continues on also could you please describe naruto appears in this story cause I read one of the sentences that mention about one of his tails.

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I explained how he appears in the literal first section of the first chapter. More than once even, since I had to have it explained once in the beginning in moving prose and a second time when the Mane 6 see him for the first time

6484420 KO well I'll check that out hope the next chapter come soon.

6484420 KO just checking he has nine tails or less?

This chapter was very entertaining, especially with both Naruto and AJ realizing their feelings for each other, the kiwi incident, and the water dancing scene.

I'm kinda sad that this is only gonna be short story. It's a great twist of the NIE theam and I would love to see what you could really do with these characters.

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Thanks for the review, it was surprisingly HARD to write a chapter based on an episode. Weird right? Thing with writing chapter based episodes, is that the episodes give the characters specific moments/lines that have to be addressed in some way in the chapter, or I feel it's not doing the episode justice. Save for when you SHOULD change lines/actions fr the greater good of the characters and fic.

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Well I already have ideas for other fics, so it's not like you'll be without my stories. Plus, if you looked at my blog for chapter three, this story will possibly have more to it, depending on certain factors, once the main story ends.

6487260 I'm kinda a bibliophile so it doesn't take me long to finnish a book, particularly one I enjoy. I grew up with NIMD with association to literature. Kinda sucked being able to glance at a page and essentially assorbe the information on it no feeling just info took me a while to learn how to slow down my thaught process enough to make it more enjoyable.

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Question before google:
Does that stand for Neural Information Management Disorder?

Question after google:
Does that stand for Neuroleptic Induced Movement Disorder?

And it's strange that my story helps connect me in so many ways, such as having a connection to one of your state of being. It makes me happy to give your bibliophile nature something to enjoy, but as I said, this is only one story of any in my head that I hope I can get down on paper

6487711 I use it as an abreaveation for near identical memory disorder the docs have a fancier name for it and is usually associated with those on autistic spectrum due to are unique brain hardwire being so drastically different from the average person. Basically due to the way my brain was hardwired my short term and long term memory was majorly fucked with when I was born. Just glancing at a page in a book the information is almost instantaneously assorbed into my long term memory. Came in handy during school. The downside though is things that should be stored in longterm memory is more often is put inot short term memory. For each of us it is different for instance I have little to no facial recignition and couldn't remember a name if my life depended on it it's so bad I can't even remember haf of my family's names.

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Your video response has been received with much humility.

Prceeds to dance a happy dance around the back of a corner

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Well then

"Ah yes, some of the parents can sometimes be held up, so I usually look after the kids for a bit until they come." Came the voice of Ms. Cheerilee, as she and Twilight came up from the school building. The bulk of the parents having left, and leaving a few stranglers, waiting on their children.

I know it’s supposed to be stragglers but stranglers is way funnier