It was an foregone conclusion that many didn't know much about Everfree. It's especially obvious that most didn't know anything about its Deeper Depths. Whether it be the Flora, Fauna or its inhabitants.
Not that I don't think it's an interesting idea, but mind if I ask why you decided to go with the whole Anthro thing? Not trying to be judgmental or anything, but this kind of makes it a little difficult to read the story.
When they are ponies, no issue, human, again no issue, but Anthro, it just feels kind of weird is all I'm saying. So I'm just wondering why you decided to go this route instead of just making them ponies or humans? Again not trying to judge or be rude, just asking.
The only reason I can think of that there are so many dislikes is that you named your character Naruto.
Now maybe you have plans to add in his ninja background at some point, or have some other way to tie this Naruto to the one we know from Konoha.
Unfortunately as it stands you have a Faye trapped in the pony world with mystical powers that just happens to have the name Naruto.
It cannot be a true Naruto cross over if the only thing the main characters share is a name.
I can almost guarantee that is one of the main reasons you have so many dislikes...people came for a Naruto cross over and they got Naruto the Faye...
This is a good story, but it should not have been labeled a cross over...it should have had its own unique main character to go along with the unique story.
I have to say, I can't really seem to follow this. I could stand Naruto being different and changed physically, but then giving this whole fae deal and making him not human at all...it just gets me lost.
However, I WILL say that the concept, while not to my enjoyment, is still very well done. Nothing against you dear author, I just don't find it to my own tastes.
That was incredible! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Not that I don't think it's an interesting idea, but mind if I ask why you decided to go with the whole Anthro thing? Not trying to be judgmental or anything, but this kind of makes it a little difficult to read the story.
When they are ponies, no issue, human, again no issue, but Anthro, it just feels kind of weird is all I'm saying. So I'm just wondering why you decided to go this route instead of just making them ponies or humans? Again not trying to judge or be rude, just asking.
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Purely preference
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Alright just thought I'd ask. Still bugs me but it's your story.
The eyes creep me out.
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...You've struck me silent with your short but vague answer....Elaborate, zashun!
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they just creep me out
6394233 What the eyes on your profile?
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no the eyes from the picture in your story. its a nice pic but the eyes just creep me out.
It's honestly not a bad story.
The only reason I can think of that there are so many dislikes is that you named your character Naruto.
Now maybe you have plans to add in his ninja background at some point, or have some other way to tie this Naruto to the one we know from Konoha.
Unfortunately as it stands you have a Faye trapped in the pony world with mystical powers that just happens to have the name Naruto.
It cannot be a true Naruto cross over if the only thing the main characters share is a name.
I can almost guarantee that is one of the main reasons you have so many dislikes...people came for a Naruto cross over and they got Naruto the Faye...
This is a good story, but it should not have been labeled a cross over...it should have had its own unique main character to go along with the unique story.
Is that a JoJo reference?
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It’s a MOTHERF**KIN’ JOJO’S REFERENCE
I have to say, I can't really seem to follow this. I could stand Naruto being different and changed physically, but then giving this whole fae deal and making him not human at all...it just gets me lost.
However, I WILL say that the concept, while not to my enjoyment, is still very well done. Nothing against you dear author, I just don't find it to my own tastes.
I will, however, give you your 100th like, enjoy