6388072 A: Fuck them indeed, they are a fucking menace... hence why they willsuffer in this fiction B: Yeeeeah... no it is not street legal XD hehehe, it has to be transported to whereever its going. But in the desert it's got free reign to drive. Its so pretty~
6388278 Thank you,I tried my best with trying to get the military parts as realistic as I could get. Wow, that's a first for me awesome! Why thank you once more, you can thank that damned Nyan Nyan video xD Also thanks for the favorite.
I only smiled and reached into my own saddlebags, there I produced a small card I carried around and hoofed it to him. "Take this and go to uptown to the Echelon Estates, go to number 666. That is my Family's estate, show them this and you'll be accepted inside."
You have unleased the devil! God have mercy upon us! The power of christ compells you to not type that again!
I could only laugh as we ran through the halls of the abandoned safehouse, running past several other fighters of our group. Some would smile as they spotted us, others would shake their heads, or do nothing at all. The whole world saw us as monsters thanks to the propaganda being spewed forth from the media, but we were not... we were fighters, soldiers fighting for an idea, of a world free from tyranny. Sure we went about it using some... more brutal methods, but we were accomplishing something here.
keep telling yourself that, it might just come to be reality
I only smiled and reached into my own saddlebags, there I produced a small card I carried around and hoofed it to him. "Take this and go to uptown to the Echelon Estates, go to number 666. That is my Family's estate, show them this and you'll be accepted inside."
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A: Fuck them indeed, they are a fucking menace... hence why they will suffer in this fiction
B: Yeeeeah... no it is not street legal XD hehehe, it has to be transported to whereever its going. But in the desert it's got free reign to drive. Its so pretty~
The story looks pretty interesting and the military segments look fairly realistic.
There's also no grammatical errors.
Interesting backstory for Derpy too.
I'm loving this story.
I think I'll review this in a few hours.
6388278 Thank you,I tried my best with trying to get the military parts as realistic as I could get.
Wow, that's a first for me awesome!
Why thank you once more, you can thank that damned Nyan Nyan video xD
Also thanks for the favorite.
6388438 Glad you are man, legit.
6389603 I hope you'll enjoy the story, legit.
*Looks*
*Sees the author used every tag but Comedy and Slice Of Life.*
*Quietly backs away*
6389733 There'll be some funnies and slicey moments~
But they won't be the main focus
Maybe, depends.
ISIS did nothing wrong.
You have unleased the devil! God have mercy upon us! The power of christ compells you to not type that again!
6408998 In this story or irl?
keep telling yourself that, it might just come to be reality
Keep the Holy Water Grenades ready
I have a thought. I find this first chapter quite interesting, and I hope one day you pick this story back up.