Jus-jus-just no, just no. When people BREAK INTO YOUR HOUSE and RANSACK IT knock you out, tie you to your bed and basically try to INTERROGATE you, HARASSES you and possibly BREAK potentially expensive equipment you do NOT just turn around and say "bad ponies, now let's head back inside, NOT call the autorities or make you pay for all the damages and let's have tea and talk :)" NO YOU DO NOT !! NOT EVEN IF THEY'RE SENTIENT HORSES YOU MAKE THEM FIX AND OR PAY FOR ALL THE STUFF THEY TOOK AND OR BROKE!! I mean be realistic here I personally would be furious if someone broke into my home ,bringing friends along with them, ransacking my house and made them selves at home. I mean WHAT ARE THEY THINKING?! " oh look a house, it looks pretty well stocked it must be for us I mean it's not like if it has an owner that owner won't be furious with us! I'm sure they'll just be OK with us breakin- I mean exploring their house without permission! I see no possible problems with this plan:D"
This is just bad writing, revise this and make it more realistic he's been threatened, stolen from, and his house and probably some of his cars too, are in pretty bad condition. He should be more than a little angry.

I like it keep going.

Ok, clearly majority says my story is bad. Anybody care to tell me so I can fix it? Or should I just go by Necatrina and go that direction. Please let me know.

The pure unadulterated faith this man has is mind boggling

not sure what you had first but judging by what nectarina said and what am seeing you might need to up the payback and lessen the compromise. For one you could try playing the fear card, the princesses and other ponies seem far to confident and assured for being in an unknown land except rainbow she's spot on. The shock factor is good though. If you plan to leave the chapter as is then thats fine but some retribution is in order and evening up the playing field...they're probably depending on him not the other way around. Oh and kudos on the comedy

More realistic ,sorta, so thx