Trapped
Okay I'm going into 8th grade this year so please do not expect top notch writing. I already got enough haters from the start of my story. So please do not hate 
I will update Tommorow
Soarin and Rainbow Dash ended up in place where no pony would be caught dead in, it was terrifying. When you look around there is nothing but darkness and rocks something you would expect from a cave that was created by an evil mad pony. Soarin and Rainbow were a few meters apart but they couldn't see anything. They both had scars and bruises from the hard fall. One word to describe this is the word nightmare.
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"SOARIN WHERE ARE YOU" shouted Rainbow dash
"HERE, I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING" yelled Soarin. Then moments later soarin felt soft hair he was stepping on and he realized that it was Rainbow, but seconds later...
"OWWWWW" yelled rainbow dash in pain.
"ehh... Sorry" Soarin said as he was blushing, at least it was dark and no pony could see blush in front of his crush, yes Rainbow was Soarin's crush since the gala, he thought she was the most beautiful mare in Equstria.
"it's... Okay" Rainbow said as she was starting to shiver and shake.
"Rainbow want to go sit somewhere, like that corner because I'm freezing cold" said Soarin as he was starting to shiver too.
"o..o..okay" said RD
AFTER WALKING TO THE CORNER OF THE CAVE.....
"Soarin I'm cold" said Rainbow
"me too"replied soarin
Then soarin got up and put Rainbow Dash in his lap and draped his wing over her. Then rainbow dug her face into soarin chest as he put his chin on top of her head and started rocking them back and forth until Rainbow Dash spoke up and said "how long do you think we can last"
"three days tops, without food and water"Soarin said with a fake smile
"really" said Rainbow she almost near tears
"maybe, but everything will be alright and once we are out of here, I will teach you some tricks. who am I kidding I don't think we are going to survive, AND I DON'T WANT YOU TO LEAVE ME BECAUSE, I ALWAYS HAD A CRUSH ON YOU, And I...m.. Telling you now because we might not make it" Soarin said as he was crying near the end of his confession.
"Soarin I always had a crush on you too, let's just make these last three days the best starting with this" then RD kissed soarin on the cheek.
soarin was blushing like crazy, then he said "I'm tired can we get some sleep" . By the time he was finished talking Rainbow had already fallen asleep in his arms. "we have along day ahead of us Tommorow" thought soarin.
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I will updated Tommorow, hope you like..
6306557 thank you words cannot describe about how I feel about your comment
I appreciate it, thank you again
~MLPdior
The like the idea of the story, but it just seems a bit rushed. Like I said, I really like the idea, maybe just add more development with the character's and explain the situation a little more vividly. Can't wait to see where the story goes
Cool story so far!
This is very similar to another soarindsh story I've read a couple of times by another author, but hey? Still good isn't?
Keep up the good work!
^coolstorybrah^
6306824 kay... Like I said I'm not top notch but I will try...
Thanks anyway
6307349 your the first person to comment without requesting anything which is the best thing ever, not that do not like requests but it's feels good to have someone that fully appreciates the story.
Thank you, I appreciate it
~MLPdior
6307760 Your welcome, and I know how you feel. I wasn't that good of writer, but with practice, your story should be amazing.
6308596 ya I kinda know that
6310644 okay, the problem is I really don't know how to do that
6307781 no prob
Wow this chapter was much better than others.
Keep up the good work! You're getting better!
6321859 thanks your the best
6322015
Thanks.
6351892 yeah about that
Hehe
Your writing has gotten better, the fact that your trying to make your writing better is a sign of a good writer to me. so expect me to continue to read this story some more and keep practicing your craft. By the way you made Soarin's name lower case twice(that is fine, human error happens).
6355862 thanks that means a lot to me
6420526 wow thanks best comment I ever got!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyway I might not go on with this story. MY FEED BACK ISNT THAT BEST
We'll thank you for being honest with me because I know my story's the worst.
With regards,
MLPdior
We'll see where it goes. You're getting better!
Really nice story!!
6509032 omg thank you
No prob!
Cute!! I adore the Soarindash fluff!!
love this so far 0u0