I really like this story, both from a female character, and necromancer powers. One thing you could do to improve this is a proofreader.

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I know I need one, however I haven't had the chance to look for one yet. As well the first three chapters were written today and posted today. I have doubts I will find a proof reader / editor that would work that fast... if I continue to write that fast. Idk... I write when bored, which happens a lot.

6128560 Yup! Anyway, there is a writing guide by Ezn in the create story thing. If you hit the ' new story' thing, there should be a sentence about a writing guide! Extremely thorough guide, so should help.

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“Goliath of the Unbound Strength, Rise. Titan Master of the Silent Sword, Rise. Devious Grin of the Brightest Smile, Rise. COME TO ME!”

I see the Darkest Night Reference. Well done.

6158076 all i see is just a wizzard 101 refrence with the skeletons... or is it just me? (if they are pirates then it would make more sense on my theory)