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This should be interesting.
* sipping sunflower Tea before reading the last part and spitting tea everywhere* PFFFFFFFFFFF what?
:c I thought it would be maud that spike was going to bang... All well, I'll keep reading.
Just a few things. One get an editor, there were more than a few spelling mistakes ( thrown instead of throne, etc). Second, the whole bit with the Sisters was a confused mess. For example, it is safe to assume that anyone reading this story already knows that Celestial and Luna are sisters so you have to mention it and as for Luna not being there, saying that she was unavailable for she was sleep, was over explaining. You could have just as simply said she was still asleep.
With all due respect pinkie...your mom is really old.