Hunter's Blood
written by Drake Razorfang
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No, just spelling. One way for the ancients, one way for the modern U.K. world, and one way for the modern American world.
Maybe the Burial Blade for Luna? If Matt have been doing Chalice Dungeons.
Did he just drop a Pungent Blood Cocktail? I gues he prefers the straight on way instead of sneaky.
6037245 Thanks for letting me know
Try not to take this too harshly, but I have problems with this story.
I've read up to chapter 2 so far. I don't exactly hate what I see as I am a bit let down and disappointed. This story has all the potential to be great, but the huge lack of detail and total destruction of any sort of emersion in this story Just plainly kills it for me. With every paragraph I read, it feels like you are just describing the game and its features more than you are shaping the story. It feels like I am simply watching someone play a game of Bloodborne and there is a random pony thrown in. Hell, it even feels like the story is suddenly going tell me to press the "A" button to jump.
This is not good, reading a story should not feel like playing a videogame; it shouldn't feel so dead. If you plan on continuing this, make it feel like less of a video game playthrough and more of something that can be enjoyed without too much effort.
That is all I got for now, I probably continue tomorrow when I am less tired and it isn't 1:19 AM. Probably then I will go into more detail and bitch about how the character feels weak. We'll just have to see...
Dapper Top Hat Luna is Dapper.
Luna is not depicted as disturbed as she should be. Oh sure, when the story focuses on her she does, but otherwise not more than minor blurbs about her being frightened or something. Also, this hunter is a moron. He also commits basically every error any DS/BB player can. Saving echoes, lugging around everything, not leveling, not using merchants. Hell, he even baited Beasts to the incense “safe” area where his charge he is protecting is currently at. He also wastes blood vials instead of a rally and despite his year of experience he mis-times a heavily telegraphed attack.
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Yeah that's been bothering me a lot as well