I would love to see both an epilogue and a sequel :)

i say epilogue and sequel

If Pinkie has a colt with a yellow coat, she could name him Lemon Meringue "Lemmy" Pie.

Both options work.

I would suggest an epilogue at the least. You've done a marvelous job of setting up the story and characterizations, to end it after the clop is pretty much just cutting out all of that story telling without a reasonable climax. (Pun intended.) The epilogue should cover the consequences of the act to round out the story, tying up the loose ends.

A sequel? I wouldn't be opposed to one, but is there more to this story to tell I wonder?

Have a thumbs up.

Epilogue but for a sequel gave Mrs Cake cheating in her husband and then both mares discovering there prego afterwords.

I say an epilogue would be great.This feels like either a finished short or the beginning of a longer one.I prefer the short version.
I like the way the characters were not just horned up caricatures common to most clop fics, great job on fleshing them out.

I think an epilogue is required if you want the story to feel complete since the story as a whole lacks a full story ending.

I do not think Pinkie needs to be pregnant at the end but I do think the fear of it possibly happening would work very well. I think you did a great job building up to the climax and did a great job ending the chapter but I think if you want the story to come fully around to being finished you need an additional chapter. I did find the idea of Mr Cake thinking that pulling out being effective birth control as being very humorous (take note people out there it is not an effective from of birth control at all) since you would hope he would know otherwise.

A sequel is only needed if you have another story to tell which is up to you.

This needs an epilogue and a sequel. But, for now, you two earned a fav and this:
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We'll definitely have an epilogue at the very least! :)

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Thanks for the feedback! :)

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Hehe, Lemmy Pie, that'd be cute. :)

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Why not both, eh? :)

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Thank you! :) I love long comments like these. It help us the most and is very constructive!
And we try our best to balance between a good story and a good clop without sacrificing one to have too much of the other.
You're right, the Epilogue should cover the consequences at the very least.

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I'm not sure about that, :P The story's a focus on Pinkie Pie and Mr. Cake. Adding Mrs. Cake in too as well as the stallion she cheats with may bring the focus away too far from where we want people to be in.

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Thank you! :) We try our best to keep the characters in-character. They're always more fun to read that way! :D
I always find it painfully annoying when characters would break seriously out of character and became nothing but horned fuckers with a name of the pony we like strapped to them. It's a disgrace to all writers.

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Hey Thanks! :D I love long constructive comments, it really helps.
Yeah, I think you're right. An Epilogue is definitely needed, and thank you for the compliments, we try our best to pace ourselves between clop and story and try not to rush either of them. Going too fast or take too long and it'll just be plain boring, wouldn't it? :P

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My first badge of approval! Thanks! :D

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You're welcome

5939645 Actually do the story as Mrs Pie cheating with someone else with no Pinkie or Mr Cake then do the third story were Mrs Cake returns home and both Pinkie and Mrs Cake discover there both preggo. Then start the feels and recriminations and eventual orgy. Want to really have fun? Have it be Prince Blueblood who was there as a guest speaker and that's the father of Mrs Cakes child. Not like she isn't a cheating bitch anyway. Pegasus and a Unicorn foals? Hah!

5939645 Excellent! I can't wait :)

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I don't think I can write that now that you've described it in such details. :P
Someone might accuse me of stealing ideas, y'know? ;)

5939707 What? You think I would care? I have no interest in the current era of MLP. I'm more of a Fallout Equestria and War in Equestria kind of guy.