Mr. Carrot Cake is left alone with Pinkie Pie for a week as his wife goes to visit her family along with the twins. Nothing to worry about, right?
Nice chapter, but there's a few thing you may want to edit.
“Are you reeeeally sure, Mr Cakes? you don’t look so well all day today! Are you sick? Does Pinkie Pie need to be a nurse for you?”
That should be "Mr. Cake? You".
“Why are we going up to my room, Mr. Cakes?”
And that should be "Cake".
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Nice chapter, but there's a few thing you may want to edit.
That should be "Mr. Cake? You".
And that should be "Cake".
5851084
Yay!! Can't wait for it!!
5853437
Hey Thanks! :D Doing that now.
5854531
It's here!
5854600
YAY!!!