You basically type in a word, like "energetic," for example, and it will give you a whole bunch of other words that mean the same thing. Just helps with word variety.
A great job, especially good use of a character undervalued as Mr. Cake. hopefully soon the following chapters, because if they are as good as or more than the first installment, I'm sure will be a memorable story
Pretty good. I am looking forward to seeing more chapters.
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Thanks! :)
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Nice story so far and I look forward to future chapters, but there's a few things you may want to edit.
That should be "them".
And I think that should be "working".
Can't wait for more.
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Hi! Thanks for pointing them out! :)
Although the 2nd one is intended to be 'wording' already, to word it like so.
Well considering how often purely English speaking people botch thier own language you did pretty good
Really great story! I rarely see people write with Mr. Cake, and you got into his character very well~
What I suggest is try using a thesaurus. For Pinkie Pie, you used the words "energetic" and "perky" several times.
Also, you seem to shift tenses, but since English isn't you native language, like you said, I won't count it too hard against you.
Keep up the good work. ^^
OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!
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Hehe, thanks!
I'm not sure what a thesaurus is, but it sounds like a dinosaur. :D
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:3 you won't have to wait for long.
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You basically type in a word, like "energetic," for example, and it will give you a whole bunch of other words that mean the same thing. Just helps with word variety.
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YAY!!
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Oooh! That is so useful! Thanks! :D I've bookmarked it. It will come in handy!
Pinkie in the shower....that poor guy never had a chance.
5828679 You're welcome~!
A great job, especially good use of a character undervalued as Mr. Cake. hopefully soon the following chapters, because if they are as good as or more than the first installment, I'm sure will be a memorable story
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Not one bit.
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I hope you'll like the next one!
WHERE IS DA NEW CHAPTER!?!? IM DIEING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!
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Editing should be done today, there's only a few pages left. :)
Noooo. Pinkie is not seducing Carrot. perish the thought (wink)
what Mrs. Cake doesn't know won't hurt her. well done. keep it up.