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I like the tale so far, but you really need an editor and proof reader.
I don't know why you keep repeating mispelled words or misplaced words all over this chapter. It would be nice if you could read your piece thoroughly before publishing. Cheers.
Revival of the Chess game of the gods!
About the raptors, fossile evidence suggests velociraptors were covered in feathers, amd there were several other species of raptors, some with beaks.
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Ok after switching to unedited chapters, i can see why you decided on a rewrite.
I like the story so far, but i will wait for edits, there are too many typos and such.
You sir have caught my interest, gods, Discord, Thor, and a game... I wonder who're the other gods and their pieces?
Dare not dear
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thanks for pointing that out that. ^^