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Wow. Great minds think alike. My characters name was Ragnarok...
A lot of promise, but the consistent problem of the whole first chapter is that you really could use a lot more punctuation!
This
should be, at least in my opinion
this
You might find that the impact is greatly increased when writing in such a style.
A skaven Displaced? that's a new one...
why not Ratnarok?
7597628 I get the pun now lol
6861358 I don't think he is displaced as you say
6861358 His not displaced.
i read this before it got rewritten is the rewrite going to be majorly different or just corrections if different how much so?
8306468
Somethings may change but all for the better ^^
For a story with so many views... so little likes, though good story either way