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6819672 I'll think about it.
AHAHAHAHAHA! That Keep lord tricked his ass! Hahaaha!
6819760 oh yes big time.
I think you should go back through the chapters you've already published to do some self editing.
The story is good, but the grammar needs work, there's a lot of errors and issues that mess with the story. Secondly the pacing could also be better. The adventure could easily be expanded to provide more character and scenery development.
It's a great story, but it could be better. As in it has the telling of being a great story.
6821511 Alright I'll look into it.
i get the feeling that he is on the LOST island
with the towers that move the island
the "black rock" ship that isn't near the water
and mentions of a tower that holds up the island
i bet there is like a giant statues foot somewhere in the story
7271495
No foot but I like the idea.