Interesting, interesting so…a new start will awake with the goodbye of his old body and the breatch of a goddess flower, a red moon rise tonight and the start flicker with moans of love and light.

Oh I can't wait what happen next, maybe to help him get used to it, the first thing Angel will do is make an astral body of his human self to remember what it was before the change

some of the vocabulary breaks the atmosphere you're setting up. at least for me.

interesting indeed.
I am rather intrigued by this idea, but I will wait for the sequel none the less.