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cool, an epilogue! still wish twi would figure out (somehow) that dash was directly involved with all this. maybe have twilight go into dashs house looking for her, and have the sigil be a family crest or something? eh, i guess it only bears thinking about if that's the path the story will take. and as sad as i am to say it, there isn't much evidence to suggest she will find out yet. maybe if there's another story.
This was sooo cute Lady Rarity! I loved it. Wish we had some idea what the S is, I have a theory but it's very unlikely.
Really interested in this keep Going
5838276 Wait....That just gave me an idea! Maybe the S stands for Sparkle? What a twist! That's why she's seen it before, it's her family crest!
Aww they are finally lover :)
About time RD stopped playing around the cloud. Twili Had been hinting since they got to Zecora's
Ever since the S was first mentioned, I've been thinking Sombra but that seems too obvious.
5839197 OMFG! It's like Fight club. Twilight has a second personality who's set this all up. DUN DUN DUNNNNN!!!!!
Calling it! Next chapter, Twi's gonna wake up in the lab again and suddenly it turns out Dashie was always involved, just to get that awesome sauce.
"Rainbow and her" should be "she and Rainbow".
That should be "harrowing". Also, the period after "Twilight" should be a comma, and the word "the" after that should be lowercase. You make this error with dialogue throughout the story. You might want to check out this guide that a fan-fic writer and reviewer wrote; it's a great help.
"Somepony to hold her- to love her-"
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kijpcUv-b8M
Um, I thought their version of God was Celestia, so would you write...
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that sound like rules of my native language were used.