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Woohoo! Polite rapists!
I could imagine that Twilight, after shooing out the Changelings from the secret facility, rip the place from all its machines, just to rebuild them in her own basement...
Well, atleast they're being polite about it all. That's...nice?
Wait, I think I missed something. When did we discover that Rarity was behind this?
Not bad for unedited, I only spotted one error.
I think that should be, "She might catch her reflection...".
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We didn't. Lady Rarity is what the author calls themselves, or their muse, I don't know which.
5827898 indeed I am lady Rarity of eqm darling!
Oh my god, that was a really good fic. I didn't even fap; I just read this for the story. You dialogue and character interactions are soooo gooood; you really bring Twilight and Rainbow's friendship to life. I usually ship this, but I think I will, just this once, because you make it so cute.
But anyways—dude! Your story is missing all kinds of tags! Where's the [Adventure] tag?! We've got changelings hiding out in the Everfree, Twilight racking her brain and using magical potions (oh, and I loved seeing the flashback potion in there—very nice use of canon) to unravel a mysterious kidnapping plot, and infiltrating an evil laboratory to enact a daring rescue! This screams adventure; add the tag!
And we need a Rainbow Dash tag! She's your deuteragonist, and the love interest, man! (I have to say, I absolutely adored that extra chapter's TwiDash scene, btw. So cute. Yesssss teasing.) And, y'know, I'd add Zecora's character tag, too; she plays no small part in the story.
And one more thing: As long as you still have chapters to add to this fic, I wouldn't mark it "complete"; that might mislead people to stop following the fic and keeping an eye out for updates. You should probably mark this story incomplete until you get that epilogue up!
Eagerly awaiting the sequel!
5827898 You're right. I forgot about that! I'm not really used to authors having an alias.
5829818 Well darling, the RD and Zecora tags were left out on purpose to add to the mystery. You're not supposed to know who shows up, unless you continue to read! You're right, though, I could do with an adventure tag!! Thank you for reading, darling! <3
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I definitely see your point about Zecora, but Rainbow Dash is introduced quite early on in the story; her inclusion in the character tags wouldn't spoil much. Right now, if someone's in the mood for reading a crazy sex mystery that features Rainbow Dash prominently and they use her character tag to search for such a fic, this fic won't show up in their search results and they won't find it and they won't read it, and that's shame, man!
And, I mean, when I first saw the story's (rather lacking) description and saw that Twilight was the only character tagged, I thought, "Seriously? There are no other characters? Does anything even happen? Is it just chapter after chapter of Twilight being raped by machines? That doesn't sound like much of a story." The exclusion of Rainbow Dash's tag just seems misleading.
Its great seeing Twi and Dash able to enjoy some regular sex after all they've been through. No drugs, no machines, no forced dreams, just love and cuddles.
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5842384 That is correct, darling, tis unedited. If you should like to offer me your services, I would be ever so grateful.
5858765 Ooho! As long as there's not too much butt touching. I have my limits!
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You've done a good job pleasing Twi.
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"...M- Maybe....This..isn't so bad..."
Took her quite some time to figure that out.
Hell honestly, if I were a girl and was stuck in such a room, I would also say, after little resistance at the beginning and then ultimately faced with no escape... fuck it... and let it happen.
And if they even listen to her requests, after having collected a certain amount, there is like no catch at all, just an oppertunity to get some amazing treatment on the sexual level. And besides, it's all still just machines, the is no one in the room, don't care what may be beyond the walls, who is watching her and the machine just wants to milk her, not impregnate her or anything, its all just lust and stress relieve, with a breeze of fantasy in there.
Getting fucked by that machine is in principle nothing else than masturbation... half of that stuff she could do herself with her telekinesis, the machine just takes that workload of her back.
And for all who think that being fucked by a machine, an automaton created for relieving sexual tension, try to imagine this whole situation as getting on a roller coaster attraction in a theme park.
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The unique intricacies of this story speak for themselves. However, I personally believe that consent is everything, even if it's rape under the disguise of 'feeling good' it's still rape.