28531 Pinkie isn't really hard to do. I'm sure at one time or other we've all had a friend (or a friend who had a friend) or a relative like that. Still, it never gets old seeing the different reactions Beta Authors make Pinkie have to different situations.
Once again well done. I found one typo at one point though. Unless when you said "I’m afraid I ain’t looking for somefilly right now, but might could change in the future." you meant that he wasn't looking for a filly, and on an unrelated note his strength could change in the future. I also remembered another issue we both share about dialogue and typing! If you type dialogue and there is characterization and actions going along with the dialogue it makes the actual speech seem slower. 'Sometimes the most important words are the ones you leave out.' or however the quote goes.
----- I am many things in many places. Here I am Not.
K well other than the fact that you used the word people which doesn't bother me that much but will probably bother others this chapter rocks
I'm liking this story! Aaaand Pibkie's being Pinkie. Completely unpredictable and literally popping out of nowhere. I like!
I"m going to sum this story so far to me in emoticons :D
All at once
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I'm glad I'm on with the characterization so far. That was one of my big worries since I'm relatively new to the herd.
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I'm assuming this is a good thing So in the words of our precious yellow and pink mare....
yay.
Bravo sir, Brraaavo.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
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Pinkie isn't really hard to do. I'm sure at one time or other we've all had a friend (or a friend who had a friend) or a relative like that.
Still, it never gets old seeing the different reactions Beta Authors make Pinkie have to different situations.
Once again well done. I found one typo at one point though. Unless when you said "I’m afraid I ain’t looking for somefilly right now, but might could change in the future." you meant that he wasn't looking for a filly, and on an unrelated note his strength could change in the future. I also remembered another issue we both share about dialogue and typing! If you type dialogue and there is characterization and actions going along with the dialogue it makes the actual speech seem slower. 'Sometimes the most important words are the ones you leave out.' or however the quote goes.
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I am many things in many places. Here I am Not.