A plan by Surprise set in motion long ago threatens the city as the Elementals face off against a group of three Sirens; their toughest foes yet. Will the shadow of Surprise ever leave? Or will it blanket the city forever?
Dam I wanted Dune to suffer, Twilight could stillb rought him in alive, after all, getting his knee caps shot off he still be alive, and who to say he didn't have a weapon in his pants three shots between the legs would made sure.
Twilight must be a walking beacon to the sirens with all the magic and negative emotions she has now. Hopefully Twilight's mood picks up before she snaps and becomes a danger to others. I'm hoping the sirens become Twilight's new pets.
7616079 I sooooooo loving this pls keep up the amazing work!... also I'm sorry if I'm asking this to much but you will let everyone know when OC are accepted again right because I think I remember you still having a few left before you accept more.. again sorry for asking I just wanted to know so I can make a form all set and ready to go
7616126 ok then thanks for letting me know looks like I have to wait a bit longer but still worth the wait in the mean time guess I'll work on a form so when you do accept OC again I'll have a form all ready to go and ready
Wild chapter from outta nowhere
Good chapter m8
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Thanks ^_^
Good Job and Thanks for continuing with the story.
Dam I wanted Dune to suffer, Twilight could stillb rought him in alive, after all, getting his knee caps shot off he still be alive, and who to say he didn't have a weapon in his pants three shots between the legs would made sure.
OMG! It's finally out and this chapter was amazing I love it so much keep it up and keep up the good work
Also just want to ask a head of time... will you be accepting OC for your new story any time soon
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She didn't feel he was worth the effort. Plus he wasn't nearly as bad as Surprise.
Twilight must be a walking beacon to the sirens with all the magic and negative emotions she has now. Hopefully Twilight's mood picks up before she snaps and becomes a danger to others.
I'm hoping the sirens become Twilight's new pets.
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No but seriously, this was awesome! I do look forward to some action between Spits and Thunder ;)
amazing
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Glad you all are enjoying it so far ^_^
7616079 I sooooooo loving this pls keep up the amazing work!... also I'm sorry if I'm asking this to much but you will let everyone know when OC are accepted again right because I think I remember you still having a few left before you accept more.. again sorry for asking I just wanted to know so I can make a form all set and ready to go
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I've used about half of the submissions at this point. I still have a lot more left
7616126 ok then thanks for letting me know looks like I have to wait a bit longer but still worth the wait in the mean time guess I'll work on a form so when you do accept OC again I'll have a form all ready to go and ready
7616079 your welcome, can't wait for more
And so it begins! I can't wait for the next ond. Great job man!! :3
Ah, the sirens. This should be interesting.
I see Twilight is going off the deep end.
Chryssie, Flutters and the lings are as adorable so ever.
Nice to see some actual hugging and not Sex for once.
Oh poor twilight she's changed so much since the incident