This was really well written. I can't normally say that about porn. This was more along the line of tastefully written erotica. It was much more realistic and pleasant to read then a lot of the junk I see floating around. A lot of stuff I'll see and stop reading halfway through because it's so unbelievable. You even had them use a condom, that was great!! Good job. It's nice to read a story like this where there's not some unreasonable bucket of cum coming out of a single person and the girl doesn't beg to have a bucket of it dumped in her face. I normally like your regular stories and it looks like I like your erotic stories too.
6006243 6006261 Why thank you! I'm honestly glad you liked it.
Speaking of standardized porn/hentai tropes...I never really saw the point of them in written media. They make for fine visual queues. But if you take those same things and then describe them, they rake up a lot of text and frankly, due to immersion factor of writing they become grotesque and downright painful sounding.
I'm reminded of a clop fic I read a few months ago that went whole hog on those things, and I quite clearly recall the phantom pain it caused in my gentleman's area.
This was really well written. I can't normally say that about porn. This was more along the line of tastefully written erotica. It was much more realistic and pleasant to read then a lot of the junk I see floating around. A lot of stuff I'll see and stop reading halfway through because it's so unbelievable. You even had them use a condom, that was great!! Good job. It's nice to read a story like this where there's not some unreasonable bucket of cum coming out of a single person and the girl doesn't beg to have a bucket of it dumped in her face. I normally like your regular stories and it looks like I like your erotic stories too.
6006243 Yup, Fuzzy does some pretty good work, dood.
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Why thank you! I'm honestly glad you liked it.
Speaking of standardized porn/hentai tropes...I never really saw the point of them in written media. They make for fine visual queues. But if you take those same things and then describe them, they rake up a lot of text and frankly, due to immersion factor of writing they become grotesque and downright painful sounding.
I'm reminded of a clop fic I read a few months ago that went whole hog on those things, and I quite clearly recall the phantom pain it caused in my gentleman's area.
Furvert manages to deliver some good stuff. I am not disappoint.
...And thinking of stuff he's written has made me tempted to go delve into the Twilestia collab again.