When Chrysalis was caught planning another attempt on Canterlot, she had expected to be taken out and executed, not brought up to Celestia's private quarters for a personal meeting. Everything after that? She had no idea what was in store for her.
5554014 ......Sombra? Really? That's...surprisingly okay with me, but I still want to see Chrissy get ganbanged by everyone! Also, can we get Twilight and Twilight in on it too? (T. Velvet to get some revenge against Chrissy for ruining her son's wedding, and T. Sparkle to get revenge for the obvious)
5561115 I wouldn't say there's anything wrong with it per se, but I don't really like the pacing. Every origin story I've ever seen has the caribou come in and steamroll everyone almost immediately. I just don't see that happening in any sort of militarized culture, even one as ceremonial as Equestria. At the very least, the princesses got taken down WAY too quickly for beings that aught to be able to punch on par with abominations from every corner of the universe.
heh.... anal virgin
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yep.
this was a good chapter, the form was pretty funny.
5557946 Wait a minute.... that name..... oh HI!!! And jes, jes it was good chapter.
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......Sombra? Really? That's...surprisingly okay with me, but I still want to see Chrissy get ganbanged by everyone! Also, can we get Twilight and Twilight in on it too? (T. Velvet to get some revenge against Chrissy for ruining her son's wedding, and T. Sparkle to get revenge for the obvious)
5561115 I wouldn't say there's anything wrong with it per se, but I don't really like the pacing. Every origin story I've ever seen has the caribou come in and steamroll everyone almost immediately. I just don't see that happening in any sort of militarized culture, even one as ceremonial as Equestria. At the very least, the princesses got taken down WAY too quickly for beings that aught to be able to punch on par with abominations from every corner of the universe.
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5714917 So far, long. As in, longer than chapter two and no one has actually done anything yet; I'm still working on setting the scene.
Have a fave then. ^u^
I like it, I like it a lot.
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Lucky Chryssie, and lucky Celestia, got an immortal partner who can be anyone.
Cya
Raziel-chan