Haha! Dude I can't wait till this is finished! Keep up the good work

.....as humorous as this was...i don't get it...o.O....why did the ice cream make celestia scream?

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I-scream.
ice cream.

levitated the book up with her green aura

Is Celestia a changeling? Is that where this story is going?

Okay, nitpicking aside, I am intrigued. And aroused. I am intriguingly aroused.

That Dan Vs. reference though...

5551324 Don't question the magic.

I don't know what the hell is happening here, and I love every second of it

XD love it! More chapters!

5551324 I'll fix that.

5551173 "Ice cream"

5551453 The next chapter shall explain

5551592 Love the madness.

I'm dead, That was too funny!!

ok? I'm sure the next update will make this make a bit more sense, warily followed.

Too funny.

So, twilight (a suiter, meaning like sexual, right?) sent Luna cum...ppffft

Twilight came on some books, hmm....

Like!

Oh, so I've come to that part of the internet. How clumsy of me.

WAIT SO

DID THE YOUNGER HOOFBEAST ACTUALLY GET ICE CREAM OR IS IT *EJACULATION FLUID*?

Well at first I was not going to read. Glad I did.

We all scream for ice cream!

duhn duhn duhn

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Same.

Oh that is SO disgusting! BWAHAHAHA! But so funny!!

Celestia.exe has crashed, please reboot.
Rebooting…

Sinister_gaze.jar has stopped working, infinite loop from "laughing.-"
  Reboot..
  Reboot..
  Reboot..
Restart failed. System is dead.

Somewhere out in the vast FimFic universes, Dan is currently sitting up as strange chill runs down his spine.

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>> TheWraithWriter I'll fix that.

Apparently you won't, because two days and six hours later Celestia is still a green magiced changeling. Of course you also apparently have two Celestias in this story.

A small puff of smoke twirled through Princess Celestia’s bedroom, catching her eye as she walked in. She watched it enter from the comfort of her bed,

One Celestia in green and a second in red. How else can she be both walking into her bedroom and laying on the bed when the book arrives?

Funny and to the point. Awesome work!

5560588 Maybe the author's busy. He/she didn't give a timetable and real life does come first.