You're a really sweet boy who's basically into playing guitar, and into metal. Though something's bothering you really, really bad. And you can't control it.
I died. Making my version of it if that's okay with you. It just escalated into nothing exciting, nothing spicy. Sorry, but from this chapter on, it won't have spice, nothing exciting. Apart from that, great, and could use an editor for grammar errors.
Anon (the reader) saved the school, him/herself, and his/her crush! I love this! It would be cool if there is a sequel.
I died. Making my version of it if that's okay with you. It just escalated into nothing exciting, nothing spicy. Sorry, but from this chapter on, it won't have spice, nothing exciting. Apart from that, great, and could use an editor for grammar errors.