Hey, you did pretty well...except there is just one thing I wanted to point out...

Illusion and Claire did have sex before, though it was pretty...awkward. Here's the pic:

Their First Time.

5480700 Yea I know about that, but I wanted it to seem more romantic for the experience of making a child

meow.

they’ll be so reliable on you that they won’t need me

I think you meant to say "so reliant on you" I noticed a few other little errors, but this was the first that really caught my attention.

I'm really liking the story.

5598803 I did type that; I just need to disable my stupid auto correct

Glad to hear your liking the story though

5599574 I found trick with my autocorrect is if you backspace the word and type the last letter again it usually ignores it the second time around, but that's just with the autocorrect I've had to deal with.

5599629 Ill keep that in mind thanks