The Crystal Empire finds itself beset by foes once more.
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I find myself mildly annoyed how this turned out. It was a good story but what gets me is this was a clean win for evil. All of the nicer or noble characters got screwed over and The Lurker got everything without much problem. And if i miss my guess Cadence is with Sombra's foal, Luna's going crazy/corrupt again, and whole lot of ponies are dead who didn't deserve it.
sigh, I guess I'm a bit upset for such a downer ending.
I accept this ending as logical but I'm a bit annoyed you didn't identify whether he actually picked up the book for Twilight or not. Minor detail that makes me go, "Did he do it or not?" I don't like waiting for a sequel for a minor detail that would have taken a sentence.
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My mistake. Added a qualifier.
6788730 Well Lurker is pretty immortal and powerful so his victory was inevitable. He only got involved through necessity anyway.
I wouldn't call him evil just indifferent and manipulative. He has no reason to care about what everyone does. He obviously has more business with the dead.
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To be honest, I was marathoning DoW I and II while writing the first half of this story.
Still, I'm glad you like it and thanks for reading.
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Thanks. I'm glad you think so.
As for your 'Likes' question, people are entitled to their opinions. Not every viewer will leave a like or dislike.
7333097 Who is Sindri?
When does the first sex scene start?
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A character from the Dawn of War series. Has a voice like evil wine. Have a listen here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVpYGzogmE4
First sex scene starts in 'This Way Comes'.
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Fuck I hate you! I had some chewing tobacco in my mouth when I read your comment, innocently wondered what I said and laughed so hard I swallowed some of it and my throat hurts! God damn Past G4COD! It burns!