The Crystal Empire finds itself beset by foes once more.
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Good chapter.
I do have to wonder what the Lurker will find and what's he's capable of. Since it's likely he knows old magic and it's likely very exotic it would be neat if he were to make minions of his own. Maybe like some kind of mist creature that is a bit fragile but can be pretty useful.
It would be interesting considering this is an ancient creature form an age likely long over where they haven't been active here for a long time. It would be interesting that the fact that he broke free and now is loose and active has a side effect of slowly it starts causing ancient allies and enemies to wake up. Like creatures that are neither good nor evil but each are powerful with their own goals.
But anyway this is interesting. I do have to wonder what's going to happen next.
I have to admit I like the mystery part of your story.
Check out this RP it's an MLP one but it involves a mysterious village on Equestria's boarders and for a long time it's been under the influence of a mysterious force.
http://www.flamingcabbitprod.com/forum/index.php?topic=1663.msg79824#new
I'm imagining General Grievous's Cartoon Network original voice. Smooth, calm but threatening.
Dugore I give a deep, booming voice. He's a warrior. He can nothing but deep and booming. Maybe I'll try Brian Blessed.
Sombra I'm giving a snobby but charismatic voice. He loves the sound of his own voice and he knows others do too.
I've been getting snobbier since I tried writing ._. Oh well.
Nigga, When Sombra speaks I think of the voice you intend him to have. Sindri has such an evil voice, smooth as silk and alluring as wine.
With Dugore, I think of Thorgar the Blooded One from Battle March. A strong, cunning, bloodthirsty champion of Chaos.
I initially thought the Lurker as the Daemon from DOW 1 at the end, but now, seeing how is demeanor is much lighter than I initially thought, it became a bit neutral.