A human (You) has fallen in love with "The Great and Powerful Trixie." Though, your friends don't want you to date her after she was a bitch to them. Will Trixie except your request? Or will she turn you down in a heart beat?
"{1st Person View story} {You X Trixie}" I think you got 1st person and 2nd person POV mixed up, I mean it says it right there. "{You x Trixie}" That's supposed to say, if it were a 1st person story, {[Enter character name here] x trixie}. I'm not trying to sound mean, if I am, but good grammar means a good story, and a good story means happy readers.
great chapter, I can't believe how good this chapter is, only problem is how long it took for it to come out.
"{1st Person View story} {You X Trixie}"
I think you got 1st person and 2nd person POV mixed up, I mean it says it right there. "{You x Trixie}" That's supposed to say, if it were a 1st person story, {[Enter character name here] x trixie}. I'm not trying to sound mean, if I am, but good grammar means a good story, and a good story means happy readers.