Travis Touchdown has quit the assassination business and is trying to get his life back to normal. This plan falls apart when he receives a phone call from someone who claims to be royalty from a country he never heard of. One built on friendship.
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I'm happy to see all the assassins come back and Infound it hilarious that the main antagonists happens to be the one guy that Travis hate the most (episode writer). Also, I liked how RD and Pinkie got possessive if the Touchdown twins when Sylvia appears. Lastly, the battle royals is going to be epic.
I'm... Speechless... I am absolutely speechless on how caught off guard I was on this chapter. Congrats, I've finally been beaten at my own guessing game.
6087179 How off guard were you caught exactly? Not that I'm gloating, but I didn't think it would be such a jaw-dropper.
6087436 Very nice. Here's the song that I listened to when I wrote the last part of this chapter:
Um... okay, right... I'm sorry but, the ending of this chapter was just... disappointing, to the point that it just outright made me lose interest in seeing what happens next, the fact that we all know the girls are going to survive this somehow means there isn't a point to this battle royal, and there for the entire set up is outright pointless.
Not forgetting to mention that if that was an actual thing in No More Heroes the series would be critically panned to the point of being unable to recover. Hell there's been talk that Jasper Batt. Jr's Shitty fight killed the entire series due to how brokenly unfair the fight was.
6087502 Not so much a jaw dropper, but an eye opener. The signs were there in the beginning, and I simply overlooked them. Congrats on creating tension and buildup, now coming to a grand climax.... And I just realized how big of an innuendo that was I said.