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5496120 THANK YOU!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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The Internet sucks at expressing sarcasm.
In all seriousness, this fic, like its predecessor, is riddled with problems. The biggest is its protagonist, Golden Streak.
Golden Streak is like if you took Golden Age Superman and removed everything that made him likable. Streak is not only invincible, but he can shape shift, spawn any material he wants, and kill anything that opposes him. He's just as fast as Rainbow Dash, kinder than Fluttershy, and smarter than Twilight. Not only that, but he personally destroyed the value of gold by flooding the market withinfinitely spawned gold ingots, destroying the value of the bit and plunging Equestria into a deep economic depression.
Even worse, Streak's has an obvious sadistic side, one which his friends cheerfully brush aside, and an overall hatred for humanity. According to him, humans, with the exception of "nice" people like him, are greedy, chaotic, and bloodthirsty.
Having god-like powers must have gone to his head, because he's perfectly fine with destroying a few cities for fun or killing his foes in the most brutal ways possible.
Our hero, ladies and gentlemen: a misanthropic sadist with a god complex.
Bottom line, this fic is irreperable. Even if you corrected the countless grammatical and spelling mistakes, it's still tainted by Golden Streak. My recommendation: scrap the fic, read a few of the higher quality fics on this site, and try again with a more original concept.
Best regards:
Flint-Lock
5498030 Oh. Well... Ummm... Ooookaaay? One: Streak has only killed a swarm of changelings. Two, he accidentally destroyed man kind. Three, he made his own race to replace humans. And even though he's sadistic, he hasn't or hurt anybody for the fuck of it, there's a reason. The changelings begin a stupid reason. And about the Equestrian economy. I did some digging and found that there is a theory out there where season's 1-4 are in the middle of a gold rush. That explains all the gold already used by Equestrians. If you haven't noticed Streak's god like powers have not completely gone to his head. He destroyed a city or two out of a fit of rage. And that has only happened two times. If anything his temper can be slightly comparable to Tia's. SLIGHTLY. And you forget that there are minecraft physics here, meaning he has survival and creative mode (He can die), and the he stays on survival and switches for emergencies only. And he doesn't go ape shit with his powers. I do respect you for typing all of that by the way.