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The Link to his costume doesn't work.
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Caps
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Form - I would suggest changing 'turn to anthro form' to 'change to anthro form'.
Three
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Presence
How
Bye
Invisibility
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You seem to get from and form mixed up often, watch for that. Otherwise, these are common mistakes, I do everything on a mobile so... Yay, auto-correct.
Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
She chased him for two hours? That is actually impressive, a human can outrun a horse in a race on a sunny day in half an hour. Humans are one of the most durable species on earth. Gotta love magic.
I love to spout random trivia I find on the Internet.
*hiss* I nearly despise the 'greater good'. It is the cause of the worst villains and tyrants, the biggest mistakes and broken hearts. For me, the idea of the greater good is a close second to a perfect world in being deceitfully good.
Hm, I wonder if Streaky can accelerate his mental processes... He is a robot.
5470910 For the trivia, Streak is a robot and Rainbow is the second fastest thing in that world. And I think I implied that Streak went at a pace where Dash could stay behind him... Anyway, I kinda thought the same about the greater good thing, I could't think of another way to put it at the time. And there will be a seen where his mental process is put to hyperdrive.
5471471 I'm not talking about speed, I'm talking about endurance.
A trained horse can gallop for 10-ish minutes, they can trot for nearly a whole day with breaks. Us humans on the other hand are meant for running, theoretically it's possible for us to run without stopping as long as we have food and water. The record for running is 3 days 8 hours 44 minutes (without stopping). Walking is 6 days 10 hours and 58 minutes.
It's mostly because we have 2 legs and most runners in the animal kingdom have 4, which take more energy to use. Rainbow dash has a pair of wings on top of that so she would be wasting nearly 3 times the energy we do. So... Magic! I could argue about this all day.
Did you see the corrections I posted under my last comment?
5472378 Oh, endurance! Heh... Yeah, I just put it under 'magic' and leave it at that too. And yes I just saw the comment. I just get home from my school around this time.
For some odd reason that i have no clue about, i read that like this "Hey Twitch, hi Echo"
After 3 seconds i take a double take of that and notice my error...
Weird
How'd that happen even...