Isn't pointless bickering the whole point of being siblings?
Anyway it was alright. You could describe the house a bit more if you want to break up Shawn and Katie's banter a bit. I really liked Shawn's reaction to the bathroom stuff being so much higher than she was used to. Also HO SHI IT'S DAAAAD
while I'm somewhat liking the new take on this story. I feel like your moving these characters back into the same groove as the old version that made them... not so likeable. in fact, katie is acting like shes 18, and dante is in college? shawn appears to be the youngest.
and while some arguments are entertaining, the sheer amount of bickering that is going on is quickly getting old.
I I quickly twisted my neck around to look at her,
I used my hind egs to support myself
My tail involuntarily flicked on the floor.…..........................................................................................................................................................................
Isn't pointless bickering the whole point of being siblings?
Anyway it was alright. You could describe the house a bit more if you want to break up Shawn and Katie's banter a bit. I really liked Shawn's reaction to the bathroom stuff being so much higher than she was used to. Also HO SHI IT'S DAAAAD
while I'm somewhat liking the new take on this story. I feel like your moving these characters back into the same groove as the old version that made them... not so likeable. in fact, katie is acting like shes 18, and dante is in college? shawn appears to be the youngest.
and while some arguments are entertaining, the sheer amount of bickering that is going on is quickly getting old.
5424370 question when is the next chapter come out. not that I want to hurry yuo, I'm just curious
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Don't worry, I didn't forget about this story. It should update again by next week.
Just a few typos.