Its your birthday and Rainbow Dash invited you to see the Wonderbolts at Canterlot. She takes you out back to meet her heros, including Spitfire. Spitfire invites you over to her place, and you two get to have some private time together.
Good so far! The only thing I recommend is getting an author. There's no major mistakes, just a few spelling errors here and there. Keep it up bro!
excellent
How devious~ :D
Nice job!
5283378 . . . U mean an Editor?
Question, if this is your second story, where is your first story?
This is getting interesting.
Good so far! The only thing I recommend is getting an author. There's no major mistakes, just a few spelling errors here and there. Keep it up bro!
excellent
How devious~ :D
Nice job!
5283378 . . . U mean an Editor?
Question, if this is your second story, where is your first story?
This is getting interesting.