No comments? Wow. Not even hateful ones, weird. Anyways I kinda like the premise of this story. You just need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. Other words find an editor. Nice spongebob reference though.

Oh and don't make him overpowered, people hate that. I'm not saying he is right now, but whatever that great sword does. Keep it to a minimum.

I realy like the way you writte and tell us the story. I realy this story :3

Quick question. How is a shield shaped like a side ways battle axe? A battle axe is typically a two headed axe with a two foot long haft, or handle, that is usually circular except for the grip. The axe head rotates with the grip to allow it to swing from just about every angle the weilder can move the axe. Besides, a shield like that would be a poor piece of work. A kite shield or a simple targe shield would be a better choice than a shield with barely any protected space behind it. Also, he has no memories but knows he isn't on earth already? Over all though, this seems like an interesting story.

i like it but the first chap is a little dry keep on writing