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okay......um...I have tried to read this story alot...several times i've picked it up, and tried to look past the things that seem...wrong about it...but i can't anymore, I can only get halfway through chapter three before I get sad, completely confused, and frustrated, wanting to just stop reading.
Luna and twilight brashly jump from one emotion to the next without and full explanation or character depth, Luna is so far out of character that I can't get in sync with her in the slightest...and the whole story is so fast that I can't get into a feel for the realm you've written....its too fast the characters don't seem to fit their setting and..and...sorry? I won't down click it cause I never see a reason to do such to a creative story... but...i can't read it either...
5620911 i agree that Lunas personality is not even remotely correct i highly doubt shed be so so mistrusting