Getting yourself a job at Sweet Apple Acres to earn some money, you find yourself something worth more than money.
Great story so far.
Thumbs up bro
I'm really liking this story so far
You sure, have just earned yourself another fan. Keep up the good work! This is a really good story.
I like it, have my favourite, looking forward to see how it works out
Hmm... Not perfect, but intriguing enough to ave caught my interest. We'll see where this goes.
Ilove the story so far it was so funny and a awesome read I can't wait to see what happen next .
Blah, this first chapter needs much work -_-Hope your able to before to before the next chapter
I'm 5 seconds in and you've switched tenses 5 times?
Great story so far.
Thumbs up bro
I'm really liking this story so far
You sure, have just earned yourself another fan. Keep up the good work! This is a really good story.
I like it, have my favourite, looking forward to see how it works out
Hmm... Not perfect, but intriguing enough to ave caught my interest. We'll see where this goes.
Ilove the story so far it was so funny and a awesome read I can't wait to see what happen next .
Blah, this first chapter needs much work -_-
Hope your able to before to before the next chapter
I'm 5 seconds in and you've switched tenses 5 times?