A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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This doesn't sound quite right. Maybe you should replace 'were' with 'had'. I don't know.
Good chapter though. That "flawed ascension" business sounds like someone's getting some conditional immortality! I hope it's going to be Cloud.
6823080 Thanks for pointing that out it will be fixed, as for Cloud being immortal he kind of already is. How that works is mentioned in chapter 11.
6823120 I seem to have forgotten, but I'll take your word for it
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His soul is tied to Celestia's.
Dang, changelings can be such jerks.
The staff has always been my favorite weapon type. Be it a basic quarterstaff to polearms and spears there is something about the staff type weapon that I like above all others. Not that there is anything wrong with swords but so many swordsman get the idea of "If a sword can cleave it then it must be useless."
All sorts of happy when a swordsman gets his ass handed to him by a "lowly staff".
YES, I have been expecting a chapter and glad its finally come. Good job as always!
Whelp, I'm overdue for a new chapter I know.
Now that this fact has been stated I'd like to address why this is and update the situation. I have been incredibly busy with my studies coupled with a general lack of motivation to write and as such the next chapter is currently at around 2k words.
However I am here to inform you that I have no intention of walking out on the story and I have every intention of completing it. Next chapter should be available within 2 weeks if not
send angry messagesinquire kindly about the next chapter in a calm and collected manner.MOAR!!!!