A long time has passed since Cloud left Equestria behind. Now the time for the return is growing near, but what mental scars does the lost paragon carry? And can a romance shattered by foolishness regrow its roots?
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Thumbs up. Even a cliche has its use when its used in der the right way.
So nice to read this.
Love the dynamic of being fully human this time around. Should make Celestia freakout abit. Along with everyone else.
Only questions I have can and probably will be answered later because they're things like, WTF is with the spear? and WTF is up with Discord? Who was he talking to?
I'm suddenly invested into this story as much as the last. Good work.
As another author once said: 'A cliché is just what would more than likely happen over the other possibilities.' I can't remember who had said that, but I remember them explaining it in a comment that stretched down the page quite a bit. I just butchered it down into one sentence. Anyway, I can't wait to see who finds him/sees him first out of our main characters.
I'm not planning on reading the new chapter till I get through all of the rest of the story as a refresher.