5073726 I can think of a better tank to use, The Panzer Panther. Rommel HATED the Tigers because they were fuel-hogs. The Tiger's were slow and always breaking down.
5074364 Panthers weren't that better really. All the heavy tanks were. Actually the panther was classified as a medium tank. I'm going with the only tank that could puncture the front armor of soviet T34/85's until the King Tiger came out.
The context and story is pretty good, but your writing technique is killing me. Especially the dialogue. May I suggest an editor? Or at least a pre-reader? The story itself is pretty good, so you have that.
Ah, MG-34s, my heart and soal. Surprised that those bastards did as well as they did with shitty U.S. guns. The BAR and stuff was good, but the MG-34 trumped them.
Ok before i read the rest if this chapter and story i have to theorize that perhaps humans once roamed the land and eventually went extinct from constant war.
7402204 What do you mean editing? This thing needs an entire rewrite, and the author needs a lot of pacing lessons. However ponies with German equipment, even though it's the '34, instead of the stupidly fast '42. When do the Stukas come in i wonder?
The title is misleading, I thought it would be a crossover with Girls Und Panzer.
Every Tank a Tiger, every gun a eighty eight.
Now this is a story I can sink my teeth into!
I love these kind of stories! I'm in!
Oh Jesus, A Panzer Tiger! I'm in!!
5073726 I can think of a better tank to use, The Panzer Panther. Rommel HATED the Tigers because they were fuel-hogs. The Tiger's were slow and always breaking down.
5074364 Panthers weren't that better really. All the heavy tanks were. Actually the panther was classified as a medium tank. I'm going with the only tank that could puncture the front armor of soviet T34/85's until the King Tiger came out.
5074381 Ah.
Hello beautiful.
Grab a Panzer VIII and prepare yourselves.
This is another piece of shit story about tanks... Have yet to find a good one... Just wow dude, this one sucks
The context and story is pretty good, but your writing technique is killing me. Especially the dialogue. May I suggest an editor? Or at least a pre-reader? The story itself is pretty good, so you have that.
WHAT?! NO NO NO NO. YOU SAY KAPUT NOT KAPOOT
This feels like it passed by really quickly, but I can get into it.
Nicely done, nicely done.
Ahhh the Tiger, a beast! And one of my favorite tanks 8D Alongside the Panzer IV.
Nice job.
Tiger 131?ยก!??!?!?!?! Celestias flaming orgams! THE Tiger 131???!!!?!?!?!?!?!
And I'm surprised that they're able to smelt stuff. On second thought, they DO have a dragon......
TIGER 131!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ah, MG-34s, my heart and soal. Surprised that those bastards did as well as they did with shitty U.S. guns. The BAR and stuff was good, but the MG-34 trumped them.
The concept is interesting, but the writing really threw me out of it. I'd say it really needs some editing to refine it.
Ok before i read the rest if this chapter and story i have to theorize that perhaps humans once roamed the land and eventually went extinct from constant war.
Why didn't you use the King Tiger?
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What do you mean editing? This thing needs an entire rewrite, and the author needs a lot of pacing lessons. However ponies with German equipment, even though it's the '34, instead of the stupidly fast '42. When do the Stukas come in i wonder?
I really enjoyed this one
NO.