Good start, a very good start!
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Adorable <3

Cute! Please update!

"Will Fluttershy have the same feelings for the large stallion? "

Since the tag says "Sex," something tells me she does. ;)

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I just noticed that to, i think on the main page it says the genre "Romance" as "Sex" until you click it. Haha

This is my first story. I'm working on Chapter 2 as we speak thanks for all of the positive feed back. :)

That is so sweet.

This is so sweet i had to eat some cashews just to keep reading

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My favorite shipping couple

This is looking good.

Tracking.

I can't wait to see where this goes!

I am posting Chapter 2 this afternoon around 3 o'clock.

Well, I'm liking it so far, but their are errors throughout. Nothing that ruins it or that will keep me from finishing it, but their are a few capitalization problems and a few times you used a wrong word, such as barring instead of bearing. If'n you'd want, I could go back through and name them all, I think, but for now I'm going to see about finishing your story. Thumbs up for what I've read so far though!

"No it ain't nothin', Ah'm jus' glad to see y'all are okay. The barrage of apples falling to the ground with a large thud. Standing over the tiny mare he noticed that instead of tears of joy she was crying tears of joy? "Y'all okay Fluttershy?"

huh wat?