Big Macintosh can't control the feelings he has for the reserved filly, Fluttershy.
MY BRAIN IS FILLED WITH MILLIONS OF DAWWWWWWWWS
Very cute. Just noticed the mature tag.
Big hmmmmmmm.
494277It's not until the 3rd or 4th Chapter where it's considered mature. Sorry if it seems misleading so far.
Don't even care if it gets mature. I don't really get into mature fics, but this one has ALL my daawws right now. I gotta read more when you write it!
It's just so fluffy
Eh, pacing seemed a bit fast, but not too bad. Also, thoughts should be italicized.
MY BRAIN IS FILLED WITH MILLIONS OF DAWWWWWWWWS
Very cute. Just noticed the mature tag.
Big hmmmmmmm.
494277
It's not until the 3rd or 4th Chapter where it's considered mature. Sorry if it seems misleading so far.
Don't even care if it gets mature. I don't really get into mature fics, but this one has ALL my daawws right now. I gotta read more when you write it!
It's just so fluffy
Eh, pacing seemed a bit fast, but not too bad. Also, thoughts should be italicized.