Long ago I was taken from my home to this strange land. Some things happened, I got mad, transformed into the Demon Hunter from Diablo 3 that I was cosplaying as at AVCon, and then sealed in stone by that bitch Celestia. So yeah, fuck life right?
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>Embodiment of Rage
>Diablo 3's Demon Hunter
>The guys, who run purely on hate to demons
>Rage
What I'm doing with my life.
Read it. It is just another Human acting villainous story, down to the last detail.
You might as well had copy/pasted 3 other HAV stories i have read.
That said its decent beginning , but there is no actual story, exempt the copy pasta HAV beginning. Well edited, but nothing really worth reading more than two times.
Write actual story plz, and stop lying in your writers notes.Well at last The description is about right, D3 ripoff self insert.
You linked to a picture instead of describing your character. How lazy is that.
4972472 I get where you're coming from but this is just the prologue. I'm not actually gonna have my character hell-bent on revenge and wanting to kill everything.
Just trust me, you'll see
4974303 Far be it from me to be the voice of reason and sound advice, but it's usually considered a good idea to put out more than just a prologue.
Less flak that way.
4976467 Fair enough
OI where is an update on this
4984417 Hang on man. Year 11 is a bitch.
I have a 4 day weekend so I'll write it up then
4984473 looks at the date this story was added
wow..... um im going to go hit my head against a wall right now i feel like a douche![:ajsleepy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsleepy.png)
4984803 Hahaha nah man it's all good
One question why the long hair?
The merchant is getting more straightforward
7449306 im now just imagining the merchant coming up to a random kid on the street and being like
"Hey kid, wanna buy this trinket?"
"...No."
"Too bad, fuck you" *le epic trinket throw*
And then bam, this story happens
7544116 LOL