Sally O'Connor has never heard of My Little Pony. But now, trapped in Equestria in the body of a Pegasus, she'll need the help of other human Avatars to find a way back home.
I was going to comment how it felt that this story ran at an awfully fast pace, with probably no more than 6, 7 days since Sally woke up thinking she was in a darker-then-usual well...
But then:
She sat down at one of the tables and looked at the lollipop for a moment, then shrugged before sticking it in her mouth: it was almost painfully sweet, and she realized that it was also the first thing she had really eaten in... quite a long time, now. She didn't know why, but she just hadn't seemed all that hungry or thirsty since she'd first arrived... maybe it was because this was all some weird dream world or something, that was why...
So...uhm...how many days actually passed since her awakening?
Also:
The most important factions are Canon Camp, the Alicorn Alliance, the Cloppers,...
Quite a few heads turned wondering who was laughing so loud.
Lastly, Rose reminds me of a certain other dull pink-coated pony who also (co-)owns a candystore (with her twin sister...in BLCA at least)...
(I also think I figured out the metaphor... your explanaton of the factions helped a lot. )
Ehrm...sorry for making you freak out.
I was going to comment how it felt that this story ran at an awfully fast pace, with probably no more than 6, 7 days since Sally woke up thinking she was in a darker-then-usual well...
But then:
So...uhm...how many days actually passed since her awakening?
Also:
Quite a few heads turned wondering who was laughing so loud.
Lastly, Rose reminds me of a certain other dull pink-coated pony who also (co-)owns a candystore (with her twin sister...in BLCA at least)...
(I also think I figured out the metaphor... your explanaton of the factions helped a lot. )